1. What overall thesis idea does this draft present?
2. What part of this draft is clearest/most effective to you as a reader? Why?
3. Writer's Question (Only ONE question will be addressed; check the main one.):
How might I strengthen my thesis?
What part(s) need more evidence? Why?
How might I strengthen connections between ideas?
How might I make my word choice more concise and
What main proofreading/format concerns do you see?
How might I edit them?